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Tell me
a small
lie       
{you want me to stay?}
No-
wait


Tell me
a big
lie
{you love me?}
I
want


a put
d
o
w
n

a hateful h i s s

Spit in my eyes
make it burn
make it sting.

Tell me
the awful
truth.

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More venting poetry...
let me assure you, there will be more
but hopefully I get back to imagery :/

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~TGfascinated Apr 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
LOVE the pause between "awful" and "truth"

You're voice is so strong, dear fox... so strong...
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~Eldritch-Fox Apr 6, 2011  Student Writer
thank you darling!
<3

that means a lot
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:icontgfascinated:
~TGfascinated Apr 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
*blushes at "darling"*
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~JokerSpawn Apr 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
is it quinn again? or do you have a bunch of douchebags around you all of a sudden?
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~Eldritch-Fox Apr 5, 2011  Student Writer
uhmm, I'm sure You know the answer.
XD
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~JokerSpawn Apr 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
am i allowed to kill him yet?
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~Eldritch-Fox Apr 6, 2011  Student Writer
Oh no, don't let me stop you :P
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