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This game
You play, long nights
Short temper, little fights

Red-zone
Heart eater, sick puppy
Kick me when I'm down, honey.

You see me as a carnage target
Blood red, right to the center.
You're a lovesick tormentor.

And I'll never love anyone else.
:iconeldritch-fox:
Ohhhoho, where did you come from?

Sorry for the confusing poetry, I'm just writing what comes from my head.

It's pretty raw, considering I take no time to think about it :P
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raw and great !
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Mood: Wow! ~TGfascinated Aug 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It's not confusing, it makes perfect sense. It's a wonderful sketch of the psyche of someone who stays in an abusive relationship... and goes back and goes back and goes back...
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~Eldritch-Fox Aug 21, 2011  Student Writer
you understand it! Oh wonderful! I was worried I was getting a bit, out of touch... or, something among those lines.

<3 I wish I could produce something better, but...alas, nothing has come from my pen, or my mind. : (
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Mood: Affection ~TGfascinated Aug 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It's pretty good, Abbs. Don't be disappointed in it all.
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~Eldritch-Fox Aug 21, 2011  Student Writer
thank you (:
really. It means a lot to me.
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~TGfascinated Aug 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
*hugs*
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~Eldritch-Fox Aug 22, 2011  Student Writer
-hugs right back- ^^
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~TGfascinated Aug 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
*holds onto her*
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~Eldritch-Fox Sep 2, 2011  Student Writer
:clings:
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