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"I'd like to imagine
It was wasted on you
The sweet, gentle innocence
Between us, two.

Over our hearts
And under the covers
We never thought
we would hurt one another.

We hid there together,
But reality is an angry storm, &
We were blinded by false weather.
all twisted and torn."

It wasn't long till she discovered
His promises were hollow.
He didn't love her.
The truth was hard to swallow.

And so he left
Afraid of the after.
She had to accept the fact
He'd never come back for her.
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My entry for the "Innocence" theme of my journal

: )
I'm kinda in love with my own poem...for once.
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:iconmisplacedfox:
I am so so so so so so so LOVINGTHIS!!!!!!!
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~Eldritch-Fox Mar 18, 2011  Student Writer
: )
awwww
thank you!!!
I'm so happy to hear that :D
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:iconmisplacedfox:
:hug: Thank you for writing it
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~Eldritch-Fox Mar 19, 2011  Student Writer
you are too kind!!
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:iconmisplacedfox:
umm... as you are too
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~Chicklit142 Mar 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing! You have an amazing gift.
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~SomethingLeftToLose Mar 10, 2011  Student Writer
wow. brilliant. it's innocent, but sad at the same time. incredible work!
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You should be, dear. Quite, actually. I love it to pieces, maybe my favorite that I have read from you.

Really. I. Love. It.

It's so eloquent and beautiful. Something sad about it as well, of course... It's lovely.

:faint:
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~TGfascinated Mar 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You should be... I'm bowled over by this and wouldn't change a thing

*bows to the goddess*q
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~Eldritch-Fox Mar 9, 2011  Student Writer
aw thank you : )
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