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Low shadows
wont bend to the
will of the sun,

But-
You say you need me,
Don't use words you don't understand.

Still, you wrap me in a world of wishing whispers,
weak waves against my silver shores,
trying to drag me into your tall teal tales,
your torn
tauntings.

Rolling thunder
wont hush at night,
for you can never tame it,

yet-
You say I love you,
Don't use words I don't understand.
:iconeldritch-fox:
Comments are wonderful.

I'd love to hear your thoughts.
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:iconet141311:
I believe this is the best I have read from you yet...

It's amazing. I dont even know what to say. From start to finish, its captivating and real.. I read it twice already.


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:iconnikifursie:
I love the alliteration in this.
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:iconmercury-the-queen:
I love this, just because it's so beautiful and mystical. :D
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~Eldritch-Fox Jan 5, 2011  Student Writer
Oh I'm so happy to hear that you love it!
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:iconmercury-the-queen:
And I'm happy you put it on DA! :D
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~TGfascinated Jan 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Hm, yes. I don't think I can any more than that..
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~Eldritch-Fox Jan 5, 2011  Student Writer
Hm...interesting comment ; )
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:icontwirlingthoughts:
Aww, this one is sad. It's a bit more abstract, though there's a wonderful use of sounds as opposed to images. In the end though, it's good. It's thought-provoking, and one can FEEL it. Thanks for sharing.
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~Eldritch-Fox Jan 5, 2011  Student Writer
And thank you for sharing your thoughts :hug:
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*williamfdevault Jan 5, 2011  Professional Writer
Cynical, but there is an elements of challenge, of hope.
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